Things are a little too centered. Cropping half of the dark structure on the left would make it a lot more dynamic!
I think the cropping should be on the right side, placing the car in a position that draws the eye in better. I didn't change anything else.http://www.tmicklin.com/Benaroya.html
I also think the cropping should be on the right side, accentuating the car and the building on the left - car's rear lights and lit windows in the building respectively.
Thank you all for the tips. I didn't even consider cropping! Tom O'Brien: Hello!! I am honored to get feedback by such an amazing artist as yourself.
I was going to say just the same thing about the cropping! But I like the darkness very much, Just too symmetrical as it is now.
thanks for your comment! i appreciate hearing from you.
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